Friday, October 24, 2008

! When All Is Said And Done ! Comments

Rating: 2.8

Is this what life is all about?
All there is to know...
I can't believe I've come this far
And still so far to go;
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Linda Ori
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Kim Barney 24 February 2015

Wow! I just discovered a fellow Utahn on this website! This is very well written. Why did FJR call you Midnight? Did you formerly publish your poems under that pseudonym?

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Shashendra Amalshan 07 July 2009

hello ma'am! ! ! 'So what's the actual purpose Of my life experience? ' well this is the question i ask every day! ! well i mean i guess lots of people ask these things from themselves i guess.. i mean we engage in this rat race to archive fame, money.. why? ..for what purpose? .. i mean we die after all.. oh! ! ! i shouldn't get carried away i mean this line of thinking always end up me being fed up with life.. nice thought provoking write ma'am! ! ! 10++ with lots of love shan

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Ron Flowers 01 January 2009

A wonderful poem, Linda. Ron

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Goran Gustafsson 12 December 2008

Very well written 'bout this segment of life

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 08 December 2008

that was a nice poem-thanks for sharing your questions -samanyan

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 31 October 2008

Excellent work, here, Midnight....None of us will leave this world, in accomplishment, of all we could have amassed....Time and Situation are our nemesis, when it comes to being all we can be...We are never too old to change direction, and seek out new avenues of potential contentment. Your writing skills, alone should speak to you, as accomplishing something that 97% of the worls has not....You are a bnonifide writer...and that's a gifted title...AND YOU...OLD? B O L D E R D A S H! ..................You Rock, Midnight! fjr

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 31 October 2008

Excellent work, here, Midnight....None of us will leave this world, in accomplishment, of all we could have amassed....Time and Situation are our nemesis, when it comes to being all we can be...We are never too old to change direction, and seek out new avenues of potential contentment. Your writing skills, alone should speak to you, as accomplishing something that 97% of the worls has not....You are a bnonifide writer...and that's a gifted title...AND YOU...OLD? B O L D E R D A S H! ..................You Rock, Midnight! fjr

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Aah... a complexity of subjects which so many of us carry with us but of which so few could write so eloquently..... t x

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Linda Winchell 24 October 2008

I've written many poems on this subject. Well done Linda! Another Linda

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Barbara Terry 24 October 2008

This is such a truthful poem, Linda. And I agree that we should have an expiration date so we can fulfill our goals and dreams and expectations. you are so right in saying... When all is said and done I guess.................... You wager what you dare. We all wager our days away thinking that tomorrow will let us see the light and completion of everything we have ever hoped for. But life goes on whether we have fulfilled our dreams, goals, and expectations or not. You get a 10 Linda because this hits each of us where we live. Thank you for sharing. Hugs, Barbara

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