Thursday, April 23, 2015

When All Is Lost And Gone Comments

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When all is lost and plundered
When the world seems empty and unkind
When your heart aches in pain
And you dread the glimpse of a new dawn
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Safian Ado Ibrahim
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G. Akanji Olaniyi 03 June 2015

This is what I will call climaxing. The ending drops all the anxieties! Good work!

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Ezekiel Haruna 02 May 2015

great words. The last line standing in support for the rest. Love lingers longer than anything. Thankyou for sharing.

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Thanks Ezekiel.

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Kelly Kurt 23 April 2015

A wonderful poem of love and hope. Thanks for sharing, Safian

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Safian Ado Ibrahim 23 April 2015

Thanks Kelly, I appreciate your comment.

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Stephen Pennell 23 April 2015

good sentiment on lifes troubles, ends on a up

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Safian Ado Ibrahim 23 April 2015

Much thanks Stephen

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