Friday, January 9, 2009

When All Hunters Meet In One Jungle Comments

Rating: 4.8

When all hunters meet,
the queen's language
suffers under dictionery's
pilate.
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AUBREY KAMPEZA
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Brian Jani 05 June 2014

This is really good

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Alison Cassidy 24 January 2009

I think your metaphor of hunters in the jungle is a most apt one for we disparate folk who inhabit PoemHunter.com. Survival of the fittest could well be part of your theme as those who are not prepared to read and listen and learn usually dropp by the wayside. Your last stanza is particularly impressive. I can see all the nouns, adjectives, adverbs and the like gathering around the poetic waterhole and comparing ideas. Thanks for sharing this. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Naidz Ladia 19 January 2009

jungles of hunters r like kingdom of poets.. poets composed of popular nd non popular defend their words by comments shows their lines how great they r.. brain are placed to control other parts below like king ruled his kingdom.. ths jungle s full of highly intellectual people who build heaven n earth by their poetries they made their own identity identity to make themselves a 'somebody'.. n ths jungle, all r equal free to move and free to kill but hpe we wont frget the word ''respect'' to maintain each others good relationship.... for in ths kingdom, we are one family... we r all living things from different countries... let our love bloom and friendship never fade... lets talk with less pride no bad feelings........ i talk wth my hearts' open, no lies n it.. ths s how i consider myself a poet n ths jungle.... owwww....cheers aubrey...

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 19 January 2009

Nice picture of this website with huge data base. The simli of hunters and jungle you have used in the title and in the verse reflects not only the title of the website but shows the vastness of poetic world mingling in words.

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Costa Anakiev 19 January 2009

hey, very cute work, and it made me smile.

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Greenwolfe 1962 19 January 2009

Excellant! Well done. I agree completely. I wish I had thought of it. Brilliant! GW62

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~Crazy Ann~ 13 January 2009

true enough, im new to, so welcome.keepem comeing so far so good

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Indira Babbellapati 13 January 2009

...and blasts echo through!

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Mohammed Albalushi 12 January 2009

totally true, when all those meet the poem come out, well write

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Min Sia 12 January 2009

Truly amazing! And very poetical! And I like the message! Truly a piece of art! It would be my honor if you read mine! ..You're one great poet!

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yza dax 12 January 2009

work of fine poet all in the jungle. FUN

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Alexander Johnson 09 January 2009

A great piece of work Aubrey...

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