When a woman goes to pieces
Hysteria and fragility are often evoked
When a man goes to pieces
Its often just workload
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wonderful observations as braced up with reasons, intensely eloquent, well penned, thanks for sharing,
A candid bit of introspection within a hint of angst. Excellent composition!
I could relate to this poem as a human and a soul shares the same feeling, realistic, intense poem, a ten ++++ for this Rani. Rgs Rema
I detect a strong personal dimension in this poem Rani - it's hard, having to wear all the female hats (mother, child, wife, boss, chauffeur, lover) . You're right - sometimes all you crave is a little space and time. Strongly penned rant. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Lovely write Rani would you agree we all need space at times deserved ten thanks Chris
I agree, women have to be left alone sometimes to get back to pieces again! Good poem, a 10.
wow an introspection so perfect--10 anju