Yes, I feel proud today.
When a poetry was born from my breathe, thoughts, sweat and blood!
I am proud of you today....
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Live the life only once but live it with full happiness! A lovely message.
''Live the life...............................full happiness.''........Yes, this is what every human should learn............nice portrait of your imaginations.
First of all.. Thank u so much for your comments ma'am.. And I have read this poem.. I loved reading it.. it's really a reader's delight.. 'Birth of my poetry took this way'... a remarkable way indeed..
I could feel her breath I could feel her pulse I could feel her blinking eyes.....u became one with her. that made u unique artiste and poet....keep writing sumi. u are applauded not somewhere but in my heart u can trust
I prefer breathing last, thinking of only those golden moments! Life gets interesting remembering the golden moments and gets boring and hard otherwise. Make it something worth living for. Beautiful message conveyed. Thank you.
Everyone get one opportunity. Some opportunity teaches the harsh reality. While some take you to soaring heights. Before taking me to soaring heights it just taught me to be on the ground always.............beautiful lines..enjoyed reading
Very nicely crafted with touching words.....Geetha......you are blessed with rare talents I sometimes envy........ May God bless you to compose many a poem like this
Still many raw stones are left in my hand They are yet to be carved Still the un moulded clay is in my palm I can mould it the way I want We know that you are a good artist! With sufficient raw materials in your hand, you can carve out any beautiful sculpture of your choice! Enjoyed!
Yes, I feel proud today. When a poetry was born from my breathe, thoughts, sweat and blood! soul filled with song of god of love and made it