Saturday, August 31, 2013

When A Poem Does Not Happen... Comments

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I feel sometimes life's so prosaic
To render it some color, a poem should happen
To give wings to dreams, to add sapor
To moments, ideas hover in the arc of thoughts
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Yasmin Khan
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Heather Wilkins 26 September 2013

sometimes it is worth waiting for the words to come as eventually they will a good write

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Geetha Jayakumar 08 September 2013

Wow Beautiful lines Jasmine...My thoughts dance like ghosts on my desk....Interesting to read your lovely poem.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 02 September 2013

It is a free expression.Read holy Qur'an Surah..Nahal(16: 125) and try to convey feelings.Muses will push out ghosts. Just comment on my poem Who is God?

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Hira Akhtar 01 September 2013

A wonderful poem indeed..i really really liked it..your poems are as beautiful as your name..

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Valsa George 01 September 2013

.... and a beautiful poem has emerged! You have successfully 'encaged' the bird of words! A very enjoyable read!

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Jodie Hardy 31 August 2013

I love it.. My thoughts dance like ghosts on my desk :)

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Mohabeer Beeharry 31 August 2013

Poems are subtle feelings in words And feelings are the threads that together make life, good or bad or prosaic as you put it. I would certainly want to catch those ghosts of thoughts. Well done. Just Beautiful. Mohabeer Beeharry

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