Tuesday, July 16, 2013

When A Pedestrian Speaks Comments

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I am fed up with walking all this way!
Why have you laid a road so long for me?
You are the one who never walks along with me
And hiding somewhere aren`t you observing me?
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M D Dinesh Nair
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R.j. Wynn 31 July 2013

Love the style and the certainty.

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Indranil Bhaduri 19 July 2013

Very powerful expressions Sir. A pedestrian's voice....

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Geetha Jayakumar 19 July 2013

Good poem. Very well said...when a pedestrian speaks..

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Hazel Durham 18 July 2013

On a hard road to nowhere, with our troubles on our back, when people in power watch and grin at our plight there is always snakes in the grass along the way! ! Powerful and intense write! !

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Valsa George 18 July 2013

The self opted destiny of the pedestrian is so very sad! He should have had a clear destination at the start itself.... and to reach that destination and give rest to his tired limbs should have been his attempt! Walking all the way where the road ends or falling dead half way is not his lot!

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 16 July 2013

Nice poem of a Pedestrian speaking.

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