! ! When A Lover Dies! ! Comments

his love doesn't die with him Rachel Ann Butler

Undying love! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! CP

True love never dies. As Eddie said, it lives on......

You paint a great picture of love!

We die but love lives on. A heartfelt expression of eternal love.

your kite flies up in the skies of love.....

The theme of your poem (written from the grave) is universal - the love never dies. The love is in you. Your poem is gracefully written with a good feel for language and the rhythm of verse. Well worth the read. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Very emotional write...true love never dies, it lives beyond death...and most important thing is to confess that love to our dear ones when we are still in life...it is crucial to let them know how much we love them....so that they can carry on even when we are dead! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! fantastic write this is....10....kudos!

This is a nice smoothe emotional read with a very good rhythm. It really enhances the story or letter as it goes. Clear and meaningful write. Well done. GW62

great emotions and message.10

very good kite..... i liked it a lot

A lovely poem, it touched me, thank you, 10 Lynda xx

Beautifully express your love well write... Enjoyed reading it

since the first line, I know that I will cry in the end..

Very nicely composed..... This is very touching and I am quite sure, it is somewhat of a consolation to write this for you... Very emotional and sad write.. Bonnie

Pretty nice lines with good expressions