When A Grief Sucks- - - - - Comments

my spirits cowers........maybe you want spirits cower' or spirit cowers? it bothers me when a very worthy poem has simple errors. so i hope you don't mind my suggestion(s) . complicated errors ALSO bother me! He leaves in a jiffy; ....He = grief? i loved my claustrophobic heart- - i'm not sure if i interpreted correctly the following: from my parents and grand parents farthest ancestors and - - - - - i don't think i understand the last line.........or maybe it is as simple as it seems. the punctuation seemed used very skillfully. i enjoyed the part about the bouncer............and the rest of the poem as well. thanks for sharing. :)