When A Boy Went For A Walk On A Moonless Night Comments

The poem is FANTASTIC...your imagination and your mind are both great dear sophia...but i have only a very small suggestion...try to make the last two lines rhyme together but dont change the end which is death...try to make them rhyme....but the poem is really wonderfull :)

like the ryhmes, , good one voted 10++

wow! fantastic you told me i don't have to comment but i really wanted to comment cuz i liked every thing in this poem..it's good but not better than your poem(the moon and the sun) which i think it is the best poem you wrote! ! i give it a ten and another ten to you! ! ! !

awesome poem kuji! ! the rhyme...the story...the whole poem! ! ! It remebered me with a mail, i read it today..10++