When A Big City Embracing Poet Comments

Dear Susan; the beauty is in the eye of the beholder, then your beautiful eyes make my poems so good, your candor, purity and your intelligence tells me what type of poet you are, we are proud of your profession, keep writing and reading.... stay blessed, many thanks for your encouragement and lovely comment

Your pen is pure magic and the ink inside it is pure creativity and the heart directing the pen is pure love of goodness and mankind. 10+++++++++

Dear Robert, my gracious friend in poetry and warmly welcomed. really your generous commentary encouraging me to write better, kind regards keep writing and stay blessed

Dear Susan, You are beautiful when you write poetry, beautiful when you read poetry, and beautiful when you think about poetry or write comments, the pen is speechless in front of all these beautiful and important phrases that you wrote about this poem, thank you from my heart, I wish you all happiness and good health forever, we always read your amazing poems with passion and Interest, take care..all the best..

To give this a 10 is too meager so I will give it a galaxy of starry-eyes 10's! This one goes to my fav list and there it will stay. Thank you for writing this!

Here- silently the canals merge into the river and the river into the sea The Titanic start her journey again- - - - > the lines flow into that last line that captures your readers completely. Oh my word but that is how to " end" a poem by not ending it but sailing it off into the future!

Here I learned the grammar of cities- - - - -> now that is using words in a startling but very fitting way! ! You have a close relationship with words and how they can and should be used! !

I have grown to expect a great read when I open up one of your poems and I have yet to be disappointed! You have a huge talent and have honed your skills til they radiate light and mystery and sensitivity and darkness. Who but you would make this work? - - -> when I first entered her street; / she offered her breast to me / showed me the fading pages of her history< - - - that is poetry that the classic poets would have envied.

Dear poets Unica Hija, Bernard F. Asuncion, Me Poet Yeps Poet, Robert M Smith, Kostas Lagos many thanks to all of you for your valuable comment, that I can see your encouragement through, your comments are the best gifts I have ever had, Stay Well and Keep writing...

So well written! 10 it is!

when I first entered her street; she offered her breast to me long time no see when I entered her she pend out for me lovely she nice recollections poet from ye

A journey of a wonderful scenery......10+++

Wonderful poem. Thank you for taking us to where you once belong.