Thursday, April 13, 2006
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When I gaze into your eyes
I cannot see them, for I see right through them
And it becomes apparent then that I have found my true abode
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A. B.
13 April 2006
Karen, you did it again. It's cool to have you back with yet another beautiful poem. Peace.
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7/19/2025 2:37:19 PM # 1.0.0
Another sweet and soulful love poem, Karen. I think I'd enjoy this one more if it had more form to it (rhythm, meter, and/or rhyme) as well as more concision in the expressions. I truly hope you don't mind my criticisms of your writing, Karen. You know I mean to be constructive. I am also happy to receive constructive criticism on my work. Warmest regards, Gina.