Tuesday, April 17, 2007

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When inspiration leaves
and an expiration expresses
more than any words I know.
When expectation ceases
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David Taylor
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Original Unknown Girl 18 April 2007

David you just managed to pick this up at the end and I'm thankful for that, these words were very deep and made me think you were heading downwards but then that last line of positivity turned it all around. Great write and have to agree, we need to feel ALIVE don't we? ? HG: -) xx

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Marci Made 17 April 2007

This is a wonderful attitude towards accepting the inevitable, when our time is up. I wish I could feel as optimistic as you, your not giving up hope until you can do nothing else leads me to pause for I fear this day and think illness is one factor I can't control.I shall save this, It deserves meditation and more thought. mm.

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