Saturday, July 14, 2012

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Lord they are hurting, in pain,
they refuse to leave this dark torcherous rain.

they refuse to turn and see the sunlight,
to grasp your hand and be pulled out of the night.
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Maureen Adair
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Saadat Tahir 08 August 2012

deeply touching...heaped with religious strengths and truisms... liked it :)

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 24 July 2012

Let them be. the chances are. we don't have to kill our selves for people who are blind and deaf. Nicely written. keep it up.

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Dave Walker 14 July 2012

A really fantastic poem, with a great haunting feel to it. A fantastic write.

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