Friday, November 11, 2011

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When confusion starts
And your rhythm stops,
When suspicion sets in,
And trust steps out
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Anhelica Velasqsuez
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Aqeb Benazir 12 November 2011

The first stanza has a similar relation with one of mine called 'Saving Grace' which I posted a few months back! 'Confusions arise, when fear overcomes Happiness glow dim, as trusts come undone' it says in mine that - the value of certain serenity in life fades out when fear overcomes it and then confusions eventually rises in between the lines followed by lack of trust... Poems like this can be related to many out there and it really is inspirational and thought provoking. good write! I liked the second and fourth para!

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Pondering6649 H 11 November 2011

Really liked this. Well written.

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