Wheel Of Time Turns Comments

very nice.full of meaning.liked it.

Short, sweet and deep in content..............

great metaphorical disclosure! 10+

a poem filled with hope and despair simultaneously.....very expressive..10

and the sky did descend! the dreamscape of the wingless bird is the sky...

Passion, devotion, dedication and helplessness of wingless bird makes one Numb; thanks for sharing, seema!

awesome picturesque...........profoundness in symbolism! ! !

lovely...you bring the picture to mind....pleading the sky to descend to feel it....sad...a wingless bird