In a barren,
rocky field
a forgotten bicycle lay
rusting,
...
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Very poignant short and clever poem a colourful evocation of childhood Loved it
Dreaming of hot winds is very amazing in this composition shared here. Wise composition....10
I enjoyed this wistful pithy poem about childhood and the ubiquitous, quintessential bike. You've captured allot in so few words. I like the way you write!
thanks. i DID send it. bri :)