Monday, March 11, 2019

Whatso Nature Has Made Comments

Rating: 5.0

If a full moon looks stunningly handsome,
So be the new, if only in mind's sphere,
So be the crescent, all phases that come,
All Nature's made has a beauty so rare.
...
Read full text

Aniruddha Pathak
COMMENTS
Kumarmani Mahakul 11 March 2019

Dull moon looks handsome and we feel beauty of nature. The greatest beauty explored amazes mind. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned.10

0 0 Reply
Aniruddha Pathak 11 March 2019

Thank you Kumarmani Mahakul. Kindly read my note below for Dr Swain. I also invite you to comment on this subject.

0 0
Dr Dillip K Swain 11 March 2019

A fabulous sonnet sir......I liked the octave part most! Let me quote two lines of it, " Yet, sunset hailing night casts its own spell/To contemplating minds that inner dwell" Penning a sonnet is really difficult but sir you do it so easily....I sincerely admire your skill...10

0 0 Reply
Aniruddha Pathak 11 March 2019

Thank you Dr Swain. Being so knowledgeable yourself, perhaps you might like to comment on the theory and justification of a 13 line sonnet vis-a-vis one of 14 lines. I invite you and others interested on the subject to give their views. I have given an elaborate note underneath the sonnet.

0 0
Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
Close
Error Success