Thursday, June 1, 2023

'What's Inside The Unbloomed Flowers' Comments

Rating: 5.0

No one knows the depth of mind
Truth and lies entwined, interwined.

The smile mask hidden deceit, show their rotten grin beneath.
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M. Asim Nehal 06 June 2023

Superb poem. I think there is typo in line one 'dept ' is used for department and 'Depth' is deep.5****

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