Tuesday, May 23, 2023

What's Going On Comments

Rating: 5.0

What's going on in stellar skies
perchance eludes our earthly eyes
or mortal minds to e'er discern
regardless how we strain and yearn
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Harley White
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M. Asim Nehal 24 May 2023

Full 5*****

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M. Asim Nehal 24 May 2023

What human eye sees is what it believes, though they are far from our sight but created with a purpose, which is to serve us indirectly, I like the way you put it in poetic form.

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Harley White 25 May 2023

Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

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Bill Cantrell 23 May 2023

An outstanding poem, it is a short poem, but by no means simple, it demands question, two galaxies colliding, and instead of total chaos, we have baby stores being born, toward end? Well, that is what Harley white is asking.

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Harley White 24 May 2023

The rondeau is by definition a short poetic form, which makes it a challenge, but one I like. And yes one wonders how much we do indeed understand about the cosmos, Thank for your thoughtful reading of the poem..

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Bill Cantrell 23 May 2023

I've tried three times to come in on acid in poemhunter fails as usual

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Bill Cantrell 26 May 2023

To comment…..typo vocal recognition…. i've tried three times to comment and as usual….

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Bill Cantrell 23 May 2023

What another outstanding example of poetic, genius, normally, the colliding of galaxies should commit chaos, but what do we have instead question, ? We have more stores being born, yes, N

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