I dont want to be fair and lovely
I want my mind to be as vast as the
Black night sky.
I want my thoughts to be like the
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A dark chocolate is good metaphorical use. Vast as dark sky...and brown dirt for tall mountain. Explicit imagination and creativity. Admirations. Keep writing.
I want my mind to be as vast as the Black night sky. I want my thoughts to be like the Brown dirt that connects to create a Tall mountain. What a great imagination. and the poet's notes be always good sublime mind. tony