Whatever It Costs Comments

I do not know if you do know, If that piece of me could Not flow, To you to catch yours and Might draw, A picture of you in my law…. beautiful selction of words...and lines a bit smudged in the mountain haze... nice impact cheers

lovely, deep and mysterious

i don't know what to say something mysterious in the writing way it is full of love it is shining day it is complecated with nice ray...

A price higherthan rubies that's what the soul costs when one is in love with life.A ten from me.

Very well writing I like it! Hope to read more soon! Keep up the good work!

strong and deeply feelings...very nice thanks

it feels like a poem of heart i do not know where to start

to own a genuine love is priceless what's more do i need when i've already had you by my side...

i think u successed to tell us what u want to say i like the love between words hold ur pen and keep working

lovely couple of verses on the first stanza...loved the end the way it connects to the title...questions within statements...i like the poem

There are a few problems in this writing that makes the meaning unclear and therefore the message cannot reach the reader. There are at my count four separate and distinct expressions which are absent the necessary connectors in the English language to make them meaningful or useful. These may indeed, be profound; But since there is no clear meaning, there is no poem. GW62