Sunday, November 10, 2019

Whatever I Don't Care Comments

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I and obscure
walking through KS your's overlooked path,
On the last edge of the path;
There is a green hut fully filled with empty hands;
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Mamunur Rahman Kayes
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Dr Al Mamun Syed 17 November 2019

Exits is too near, Ks; it is not known Uncertain unpleasant, what of it...heavy verse

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Samira Liza Lucky 12 November 2019

Good days flung Neverness sexy smile Hot and heavy couple Dominant family hooker What have you, at least KS, you 'll have a good hors-lorry....I like much these lines

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Ranjon kumar radha 12 November 2019

Interesting penned.....every lines contains much imagination

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marian lorrete 10 November 2019

Every stanza instigate me to read it through.Go on dear poet

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Mahtab Bangalee 10 November 2019

me and the shadow side by side wrapping by the true and false in the kinetic spirit within the nexus gravity everything there is but nothing at reaching catch oh! matter of dream the world is delusional peace!

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Kingsley Egbukole 10 November 2019

Very well penned. Give you a ten. Thanks for sharing. Please kindly check my poems HOPE and THE BEAUTY OF DEATH and leave your comments.

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Mamunur Rahman Kayes

Mamunur Rahman Kayes

Sreemangal, Bangladesh
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