Sunday, July 13, 2008

Whatever Gets You Through The Day... Comments

Rating: 4.3

I cannot get to thinking
of something more profound
Not doing much sleeping
with all this clowning around
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Tia Maria
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Pamela Lutwyche 12 September 2008

This is a very nice little rhyme and understandable.

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Tom Balch 14 July 2008

I do like this change in you, OUT it must be written. regards your PB

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Shy Powder 13 July 2008

Your poem was ever so slightly choppy, but how very nice is your tone :)

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