'Whatever' Comments

i like the OG smooth pick up. when she is ready she is ready but in the mean time a mans got to get his money while his cue is smokin'.

Like the humour a lot, very good poem, two extra good lines....... My night's wide open and Because my pool que's smoking. very good writing. (still laughing)

A really great poem, women always get their own way, it's the way of the world. A great write.

Like it, whatever your idea in...it sounds good Bernard, hope you finished touring! then rest much_Unwritten Soul

It is true, a 'beggar' has no choice.Let the lady decide. Make her think she is the boss and you will be her owner. Interesting poem!

this poem is invitational and lyrical has a music quality to it