Wednesday, March 12, 2014

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Rating: ★4.0

She paints a lovely picture
But here's the shocking twist
The paintbrush is a razor
And the canvas is her wrist
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Molly O'Shaunessy
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Khairul Ahsan 18 March 2014

The first four lines stand out. I wish you wrote on happier things of life.

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V P Mahur 18 March 2014

Dear Molly, deep and sorrowful poem. Thanks!

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Chuy Amante 12 March 2014

A cold crash landing! I love it! ! ! bravo, more!

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Colleen Courtney 12 March 2014

I find the first four lines captivating. Nice job!

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