Monday, August 13, 2018

What You Say What We Say (On Independence Day Of Pakistan) Comments

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You say you'll kill our children thirsty
Yes, I am sure you can do what you say.
We say, we shall never kill the women and children
We shall not kill even the armless men,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Savita Tyagi 20 August 2018

Happy Independence Day with peace and joy to you.

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Mahtab Bangalee 16 August 2018

Specially I do not hate anyone, any country, any caste, any race, any hue, any religion, any............. but some history makes me hater! /// absolute writing on the teaching of Prophet Mohammad (pbuh)

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 August 2018

there is water water ever where but not a drop t drink nor share what a sad state of affairs

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Richard Wlodarski 14 August 2018

Love and peace, Akhtar! Excellent tribute to independence!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 August 2018

A powerful political write. A thought provoking and a stingy satire regarding the attainment of peace of the country. Cleverly written.10

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Khalid Saifullah 13 August 2018

May God save Pakistan! May God save this area from the war of water! A touching poem.

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