Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)
Wednesday, September 12, 2012

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Flaws and toes
Lies and cries
My i sing this loudly sang silent chorus,
thats all it took for me to be me
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Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)
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Dave Walker 04 November 2012

A famtastic poem, like it.

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Poetheart Morgan 22 September 2012

Your sing, that you think is only yours is a chant of your Country! ! Very delicate and poetic.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 22 September 2012

a lonely and battered heart wants to sing chorus to find our romantic identity..various images well carved!

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 21 September 2012

Woooow! ...mntasekhaya uyichanile poem ena! ...solo nditsho intok'bana uyincutshe, esi sihobe ndisiphinde kwade kwa kane, ubummandi baso buyababazeka, betha ungayeki mntakwethu ndiyazingca ngawe. Siya_! !

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 17 September 2012

Upon the splendid spells of spiral evil that a loyal devil tear on my efforts that hailed a dark shadow to the lucky shoulders dismantled by the spiritual elements that kept on fighting back to pull him down in concepual irrelevance, Forgive my heart Forget my mind And, And And my i sing the loudly sang silent chorus thats what it took for him to learn what love is that is outrageous.....o man.....the eloquence....non pareil....such a rich composure of meaning and gist is so immense in feel....as i say u leave reader's mind unstoppable that they continue to write where u left like hono'ble Mrs.Nilakshi says u're inspiring! !

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Neela Nath Das 14 September 2012

The nice fabrication of words woven with deep thought. Anele, thank you for sharing this wonderful poem.

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Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)
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