Friday, November 11, 2022

What You Must Do Comments

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Each makes for himself his own hell or heaven,
Each finds for himself his face, false or true.
For none can augur you what's odd or even;
For none can do for you what you must do.
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Patti Masterman
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Rob Lamberton 06 March 2024

"Each makes for himself"

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 June 2023

I have come across this excellent poem and this is a TOP Marks poem, I am not able to surf all the poems old and new on our loved PH, I wished I COULD. This poem speaks the truth and nothing but the truth.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 March 2023

Tremendously true! TOP Marks for you, dear Patti.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 March 2023

Tremendously true! TOP Marks for you, dear Parri.

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Smoky Hoss 26 December 2022

This is a beautiful, incredible, soulful poem. It is a sincere, honest look at the self within, the liberty, not enslavement that we have, the first line makes it clear, this is an element of eternity, to miss that is to NOT understand the brilliance of this amazing poem.

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Smoky Hoss 29 November 2022

Smoky is definitely not smarter than Bri! ! ! : )

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Kim Barney 12 November 2022

Makes perfect sense to me...

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Bri Edwards 12 November 2022

Lines 1,2, & 3 I don't understand. Line 4 is tricky. There ARE things others can do for me, like brush my teeth or balance a checkbook, or breathe! But...IF I MUST DO IT/THEM, THEN, BY GOLLY, I GUESS I (not others) MUST. Hmm? bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 12 November 2022

Among other meanings, 'augur' means: '1: to foretell especially from omens.2: to give promise of: presage ' ....or so 'the computer tells me'. ;)

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David Wood 12 November 2022

Very apt and very true!

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Smoky Hoss 11 November 2022

Exactly, absolutely true!

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Bri Edwards 12 November 2022

Smoky must be smarter than I am, ...or not. ;) bri

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