Friday, February 28, 2014

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You come into my eyes
Like a dream of angels
You drop from my eyelids
Like the leaves of orchids
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V P Mahur
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Vivek Tiwari 28 February 2014

Thee most admirable things for this poem 1- Similes 2- Rhymes 3- Imagery These all elements make this a beautiful poem of romanticism. The use of similes recalls Sarojini Naidu's poems.

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Ellen Shaw 28 February 2014

such wonderful imagery, very nice poem

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Shraddha The Poetess 28 February 2014

really a very nice poem................ nice to read............. i also invite u to read mine specially hindi ones

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Geetha Jayakumar 28 February 2014

Beautiful poem. Wonderful flow of words... What you create is out of reach Like a wise man’s new preach Very true said in few lines. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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Tabasom Azadee 28 February 2014

it is very good but it is not enough simple for anyone to underestand you

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V P Mahur

V P Mahur

Siyana (UP) , Bulandshahr, India
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