Images, thoughts, feelings of you run through my head
I cant forget what you said.
I want to scream out with frustration and anger
This feeling keeps getting stranger and stranger.
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I think you captured your emotions very well and all flustration is here so widely expressed, I think it's really good emotional write so keep it up :)
great, this is really a good effort. the poem is nice and i love the image u presented.
awesome use of language to capture your thoughts.....love the use of Little Bo Peep- it really connects with the reader