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This may or may not be make-believe but the images are so sharp and sensory and immediate that I was completely convinced this was a real place shared by real people in the flush of real love. This could have been an overly delicate evocation of an ideal space (which would be fine in its context) but instead I get the sense of two vivid imaginations united in creating (Let's call it) a Love Zone. Just in terms of the craft of writing, these two line stanzas are brilliant! I cannot imagine this poem in any other format - it's that polished. And the closing couplet is the perfect ending!

Wishes do come true... a fantasy laid down by the heart is a corner stone of one's tomorrow... may all of your wishes come true.