Tuesday, June 20, 2006

What Would Your Mother Say Comments

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He stopped me not far from home
Told me straight he wanted my phone
'leave of mate' I nervously said,
then he grinned and punched me straight in the head.
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Ivy Christou 11 July 2006

what a poem! it has a fantastic flow, it is meaningful and yet provides an interesting reading! well done HBH

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Amanda Lukas 20 June 2006

I agree with Ernestine about the ending. Fits perfectly!

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Ernestine Northover 20 June 2006

This is great Vincent, I loved the theme running through it, with the ending just right.Excellent. Love Ernestine XXX

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