Sunday, October 11, 2020

What Would You Say Comments

Rating: 4.7

I haven't forgot but you have
And even got my name wrong
You've surely been lying to me all along
So today what would you say
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Yiyan Han
COMMENTS
Susan Williams 08 November 2020

Definitely would stop my heart from lingering over that one- but how hard it is to give up on a dream. Well done!

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Anjandev Roy 28 October 2020

Brilliant piece......thank u, dear poet........anjandev roy.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 October 2020

A poignant yet lovely poem. Touching lines that express the longings of the hear.

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Unwritten Soul 18 October 2020

The feeling you attached to the words really strong. I found hope, broken, regret, love in them. Beautiful.

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Khairul Ahsan 11 October 2020

A nice, poignant poem. 'Each single day hard for me to pass Knowing you don't have me in your heart' - It's a difficult situation more or less everybody has had to pass in some points in life. Difficult path, but not impassable.

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Anil Kumar Panda 11 October 2020

A very sad poem on love. Beautifully crafted to make it touching. Thanks for sharing.

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