I haven't forgot but you have
And even got my name wrong
You've surely been lying to me all along
So today what would you say
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A poignant yet lovely poem. Touching lines that express the longings of the hear.
The feeling you attached to the words really strong. I found hope, broken, regret, love in them. Beautiful.
A nice, poignant poem. 'Each single day hard for me to pass Knowing you don't have me in your heart' - It's a difficult situation more or less everybody has had to pass in some points in life. Difficult path, but not impassable.
A very sad poem on love. Beautifully crafted to make it touching. Thanks for sharing.
Definitely would stop my heart from lingering over that one- but how hard it is to give up on a dream. Well done!