What Would You Do? Comments

Dear poet, I rode most of your poems and I'm amazed. I assure that I still so amazed. In the same case, you gave me some news about writing a poem in short. Thank and good contui...

The path would grab you, crunch your bones, Suck you blood-sweat-tear Lick your dream, hope, Gulp you gleefully Finally crawl down to the dark abyss., , , , , , , symbolically your are saying soo much my dear poet.... yes desire is like that as u wonderfully describe in this poem. thank you dear poet. tony