Friday, January 18, 2008

What Would I Have Said If I Had Known Comments

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what would I have said
if I had known what you were thinking?
courting the thought of suicide.
how did you lose hope so early in the race?
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shannon wright
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Roger Cornish 18 January 2008

I agree with James...... Depp subject handled skilfully.... Ver Well done! RogerX.

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James Atkins 18 January 2008

Nice poem. I liked the way you maintained a rather gentle tone, without falling into angst as so many poems on this subject often do.

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