Wednesday, October 19, 2011

What Would I Do Comments

Rating: 4.6

I'd follow the sun
I'd follow the moon
I'd walk a storm
in the desert for you
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Dave Alan Walker
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Rachel Butler 24 October 2011

'I'd follow the sun I'd follow the moon' RAB

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Vipins Puthooran 20 October 2011

Love is an eyot cascading from an unknown mountain of heart! I like this one

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Sidi Mahtrow 20 October 2011

You hear the twang Of the guitar strings As they are plucked One by one Waiting for the Words to come. And then silence Fills the air But the memories Are still there. s

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Jacqui Broad 20 October 2011

Now that's what I call love. Action speak louder than words. Don't just say it, show it! Beautiful piece... :)

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Eric Cockrell 19 October 2011

the most powerful force in the universe... love! good poem!

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