Tuesday, May 23, 2006

What Would I Do? Comments

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I lay in bed thinking about life
Wondering what life would be like
If this guy weren't in it..
He's so different from all the other guys i've known
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Caryl Morgan
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BEAU GOLDEN 22 June 2006

u conveyed those feelings beautifully. passion breathes deeply throughout the poem

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