Sunday, August 5, 2012

What Would Happen? Comments

Rating: 3.4

What would happen
if you just let go
and open your heart
completely
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Kasia Fedyk
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Kelly Seale 08 August 2012

This is very deep, what would happen? Would the heart skip a beat, would tears fall from the sky, would your eyes see through the darK? What would happen if the door to the unknown is opened? Great Ink Kasia! Please see my poem entitled A Rose By Anyother Name -Kelly.

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Hamid Negah 08 August 2012

Kasia, for today i learned my lesson, thank you.

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Valerie Dohren 05 August 2012

It would be nice to be beautiful and free, but we need life's experiences to enable us to evolve spiritually, and though painful, if we believe in spiritual evolution, then we are each moving forward to an eventual state of enlightenment. Good question though, and very well expressed.

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Sina Farajzadeh 05 August 2012

Well! Heavy pain and doubt. Really great idea. I mean it. My doubt is really heavy. Heavier than majority of people. Yet my pain is heavier than my doubt! Un-imaginable! Oh, dear friend, if I see myself empty as a child, then I would think would grow older soon? But when I'm old, I'd think, what'll happen if I grew young. Good poem honey. I'd be glad to see your comments about my poems. Thanks.

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Romeo Della Valle 05 August 2012

What would happen? That is questions with a thousand answers! You would tear down that fence in front of you and would be able to have a full view of the World! Discovering that there is a treasure at the end of the rainbow waiting for you! Your life would become as colorful as that rainbow! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and God Bless You! Romeo-NYC

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