Tuesday, January 19, 2021

What Would Amsterdam Be Like? Comments

Rating: 5.0

What would Amsterdam be like...
if we removed the dike?
I hope my cousins, Beth and Jim
both know how to swim.
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Cowboy Ron Williams
COMMENTS
Sylvia Frances Chan 20 June 2021

Dear Cowboy, are you riding a horse right now, how would Cowboy Williams be not sadled on a horse..Another packed humor

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Susan Williams 03 February 2021

very good --packed humor in small package! 5 stars

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 21 January 2021

A cool super rhyming poem with a fun question. Fab pic too. Thumbs up. Plz do read and comment my newest poem too titled, 'mini earthquake experiences'

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 January 2021

I feel flattered that you are inspired by my poem recently 'For Dear Vinhie'. The picture you added is cutest view of Amsterdam.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 January 2021

5 Stars for this beautiful brevity, William Sir! You wrote a fascinating poem! To my favourites

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 January 2021

Dear William Sir, I am happiest to read your poem about AMSTERDAM! Wow! I enjoyed this a very lot, but if you move the dike, then you and your friends must help those victims of the water disaster! A merry poem full of fun, but Amsterdam without the dike, gretest water disaster, William Sir!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 19 January 2021

i hope Syliva like this one because it made me smile Bravo! Bravo!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 January 2021

Thank you so much, dear LeeAnn, it made me smile either. I enjoyed the Cowboy his poem as we can read above.5 Stars, William Sir! To my favourites. Such a lovely brevity.

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