Sunday, January 4, 2009

What Words Can Do! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Comments

Rating: 3.5

He told me when he is dancing
Words but not just words
He takes me under my shalder
Grows me in the most beautiful clouds
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laila lili
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Chris Newlash 19 June 2009

This piece was great, and thankyou for reading my poem 'Play me like a Piano' that was very kind.

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premji premji 25 February 2009

i saw a beautiful lili among thorns...........

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Rissa Martinez 28 January 2009

nice write.i like your style and concept of this words can do either constructive or destructive words can kill if spoken with harshness

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Jihad T 15 January 2009

Sooooooooooooooo innocent laila i like it the most i wish if i could hear it with music

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Derya T. Samsa 09 January 2009

How sweet! I really love the innocence of your words, Laila.

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Miriam Maia Padua 07 January 2009

lovely write...with innocent feelings...words can we make us believe that love is sweet...and sometimes bitter....Words can make our head go round...lol..thanks for sharing....10+++

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Hazem Al Jaber 06 January 2009

words can make more than a weapons.. words can gives a life and can kills.. so beautiful dear sweet girl.. hazem al..

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