Tuesday, November 24, 2009

What Will It Take? Comments

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What will it take to become perfect for you?
I've tried and I've tried and I've tried.
What? Do I have to do what you do?
Do have to act superior and lie?
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Danny H 24 November 2009

The comment about the Am i perfect yet, wrong poet sorry. but still its very very good.

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Danny H 24 November 2009

just like your other poem Am i perfect yet ? quite good poetry :) Keep it up.

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