What Will I Do? ? ! ! : ( Comments

Beatifully expressed...I can feel the pain...Brilliant.God bless u and ur friend...and ur friendship...

perfectly shows the pain that love can cause, a great poem thnx!

expression is expressed here

Captures the pain of love well. Sad one but expressive one.

great feelings, , i like the way u express it, , the words, , the rhyme, , the way AMAZING! ! like it soo much thx 4 charring ang.

I see the story of a real friendship in this poem, you have a sensitive heart my dear comrade of poetry...you have been reflected your sincere feelings...8 points fot nice poem. Nilufer DURSUN

A true reflection of your dedication and undying love for your friend. And not to mention that you are a natural talent. Good luck.

Your poem is sincere and reflects your loving emotion for your friend, Their reply has more value than can ever be judged by strangers. Myself included. TFriends may also want to keep their name private. ...Louie Levy

You can never replace a true friend, and trust me I know, but they can never leave you. Good luck my young friend Ian

You're a gifted soul Wassila.. This one is really good.

Its a really good and nice poem Wassila it has good meanings and feelings for the reall friendship hope u miss no1

Nice dedication to your best friend I don't think it will happen good work regards

Gud work, keep it up. Check 'The Cry of an Orphan' out from my collection.Think there is somtin incommon.

Gud work, keep it up. Check 'The Cry of an Orphan' out from my collections.Think there is somtin incommon.

Oh wow thats a realy lovely one

i really like diz poem. it's like everythin wrapped in one. keep up the gud work x0x0x-gabbie

like everything else in life, you will survive.

i think you spelled 'angel' as 'angle'

This very touching I also dedicated a poem to Doha. I hope yu are both well and happy.

interesting............my comment is what can be done? let u think it over..........also appreciate your comments on mine.............