Friday, November 7, 2008

What Will Happen To Me (11/7/08) Comments

Rating: 4.8

Is it wrong or is it right
Do I have the right to fight
The feelings deep inside of me
Or is this how I'm supposed to be
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Kayleigh ....
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Lee Crowell 11 November 2008

the last stanza shows a level of maturity unusual for your age keep on writing, your talent will keep us reading

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Jennifer Sollmann 07 November 2008

this poem is fantastic. i love it. && it won't always be bad, there must be sadness and pain for joy and happiness to exist: ]

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