What Went Wrong.... Comments

from a positive side to the silliness of human life...............very well written

A Beautiful poem. Death happen so suddenly, it doesn't spare even the hale and healthy. It's a beautiful question asked What went wrong? Nothing is predictable in our life. Anything can happen any time.... I loved reading each lines.....

a beloved's death is never timely but manifold is the grief when death comes abruptly.

What went wrong is not clearly mentioned... but it is to be assumed that the man is grieving over someone's untimely and premature death! Is it his beloved who has been snatched away by the hands of fate or his dear child? 'A flowerlet is crushed down by ruthless tread'! A poignant write! The man's plight is movingly narrated and a suspense created from the very beginning and retained till the end! Great write, Deepak!

what went wrong, very fine writing, thanks,