Thursday, May 23, 2013

What We Were Comments

Rating: ★5.0

On the cabinets, on the tables, pinned on the wall.
Precious memories, pictures of us all.
Something fragile, a beauty so rare.
A new day dawning that we shared.
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joses tirtabudi
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Joses Tirtabudi 23 May 2013

thanx. :) Much appreciated. :)

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Amanda Laurent 23 May 2013

This poem has a nice rhythm to it, and the way you describe the relationship is fresh and creative. One of my favorite parts was about how setting off bombs was an inside job but blamed on others - insightful.

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