Wednesday, June 8, 2011

What We'Ve Become Comments

Rating: 5.0

I’m awake, but dreaming.
Heart’s asleep. Brain’s scheming.
Lies buried beneath my tongue,
hiding hate for what you’ve become.
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Jayson Howard
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 08 June 2011

Great poem. Rich in imagery and style. Wonderfully conceived. Liked it. I rated it 10/10. Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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