no ambition
to nail the truth down,
bask in the glory,
shove it down throats
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Lee, This is just a great poem. Too many parts are stunning for me to quote them, but 'cyber immortalize'...wow! I always enjoy seeing what a great and innovative mind can do with words that some think are trite or overused. This is fresh and thought-provoking.
Oh my, the next to last stanza blazes, - you do have ambitions! My thoughts race when I read thought-provoking poetry; my notes: ' we are all worlds apart.' My favorite (I anguished over this choice) : ' my tongue twirls the flavors of the earth's cuisines..' Mighty nice.
no one knows whose spring is stronger or who's first in fate's line. Rachel Ann Butler