Tuesday, August 12, 2008

What We Think We Are Comments

Rating: 5.0

no ambition
to nail the truth down,
bask in the glory,
shove it down throats
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Lee Crowell
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Rachel Butler 22 September 2009

no one knows whose spring is stronger or who's first in fate's line. Rachel Ann Butler

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Sally Plumb Plumb 28 May 2009

This poem is wonderful. You are a master bit.

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Callie Carroll 20 April 2009

Lee, This is just a great poem. Too many parts are stunning for me to quote them, but 'cyber immortalize'...wow! I always enjoy seeing what a great and innovative mind can do with words that some think are trite or overused. This is fresh and thought-provoking.

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Chuck Petz 15 November 2008

Yeah!

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Callie Carroll 09 October 2008

Oh my, the next to last stanza blazes, - you do have ambitions! My thoughts race when I read thought-provoking poetry; my notes: ' we are all worlds apart.' My favorite (I anguished over this choice) : ' my tongue twirls the flavors of the earth's cuisines..' Mighty nice.

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