The evening sun shone its magic light
on the trees along the white sand shore
a superb scene, a pure delight,
an amazing sight, rarely seen before
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I love your poem and totally agree with your notes on your poem and know how true it is for us what we give out we get back....10
A lovely write- - - Our thought determines our behavior- - - - - Our inner emotions are reflected on our face- - Your thoughts were filled with love for children and so they were instantly attracted to you and made friends with you.- - - - -Thanks for sharing the beautiful poem.
The visuals within your poem are beautiful. and your words of wisdom in your poet's notes. very enjoyable read.. Annette
wonderful writing..... I love the Title and the last Verse........ Thanks for sharing! !