Saturday, January 14, 2017

What We Think And Feel... Comments

Rating: 5.0

The evening sun shone its magic light
on the trees along the white sand shore
a superb scene, a pure delight,
an amazing sight, rarely seen before
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Aufie Zophy
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Ryson Dsouza 19 January 2017

wonderful writing..... I love the Title and the last Verse........ Thanks for sharing! !

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Simone Inez Harriman 19 January 2017

I love your poem and totally agree with your notes on your poem and know how true it is for us what we give out we get back....10

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Bharati Nayak 18 January 2017

A lovely write- - - Our thought determines our behavior- - - - - Our inner emotions are reflected on our face- - Your thoughts were filled with love for children and so they were instantly attracted to you and made friends with you.- - - - -Thanks for sharing the beautiful poem.

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Annette Aitken 17 January 2017

The visuals within your poem are beautiful. and your words of wisdom in your poet's notes. very enjoyable read.. Annette

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Pancham Vinay 14 January 2017

Well written

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