What We Miss Comments

I like the lines: To the swaying of the branches in the gentle breeze From all the busy birds that seem to pass us by Or that lonely cloud fluffy in the sky Stop and take notice, its absolute bliss So many amazing things, all that we miss That was beautiful. Many people don't appreciate the beauty of nature and they ignore it. Lucky me I'm the opposite to that. I look up at the sky to see the clouds and the moon and when I don't see it I really get angry. The clouds are beautiful specially when its a rainy day. And the last time I saw the moon it reminded me of Dracula. It was perfect. Hugs and kisses. xoxo. B.B.

its relaxed n true we need to take time to smell the air n just not rush things gd job for first time keep writing n do wht u luv u do i hope can read n comment my poem

This poem has a very realaxed yet upbeat tone to it which is just awesome. The wording is very good and I absolutely loved it. Great job